Hey guys, please review my video. I've spent over 8 hours editing it.

The text that pops up on the screen is really well done. I like how it pops in and has some life to it rather than just plain text. The background music is a good addition.

This type of video is not usually my style, but the editing is well done. One thing I would suggest is to shorten the video. Shoot for maybe 5-6 minutes of the prime sections, with 2ish minutes max in each zone. There are some funny moments but it felt like some of the scenes went on too long and I lost interest seeing the same scene play out.