Help me improve my content! (:

[DoodlesPlays]

hey guys thanks for clicking! below will be a link to ep.#1 of my minecraft survival series, if you'd take a little time to watch it and tell me what i'm doing right and wrong with my commentary it would be much appreciated! it would really help me improve the content of my very young gaming channel

 

[TheMegaKilometers]

ok so I am watching your video and you aound like a robot, I am not trying to be mean but its true, you just need to let loose and have fun commentating. You have a voice that would work but I deffinently think that you don't sound natural.

 

[DoodlesPlays]

well thanks for the feedback, any advice is much appreciated! i'll do my best to improve my content soon but my channel is still very young. i do have alot of fun recording my videos and editing them and i will do my best to show it more in my videos

 

[ezmac]

I have to say your contents not bad! its good quality and the audio is nice. if you want i would love to record a video with you! also if you would like i could make you a cartooned face for your skin

 

[TheMegaKilometers]

I have to say your contents not bad! its good quality and the audio is nice. if you want i would love to record a video with you! also if you would like i could make you a cartooned face for your skin

well thanks for the feedback, any advice is much appreciated! i'll do my best to improve my content soon but my channel is still very young. i do have alot of fun recording my videos and editing them and i will do my best to show it more in my videos

hey! how about we all record!!!

 

[DoodlesPlays]

I have to say your contents not bad! its good quality and the audio is nice. if you want i would love to record a video with you! also if you would like i could make you a cartooned face for your skin

that would be amazing! i'd really appreciate it if you would, i'd love to see it! and i'm definitely not against recording a video with you [DOUBLEPOST=1389054935,1389054911][/DOUBLEPOST]

hey! how about we all record!!!

not a bad idea

 

[ezmac]

that would be amazing! i'd really appreciate it if you would, i'd love to see it! and i'm definitely not against recording a video with you [DOUBLEPOST=1389054935,1389054911][/DOUBLEPOST]
not a bad idea

that would be amazing! i'd really appreciate it if you would, i'd love to see it! and i'm definitely not against recording a video with you [DOUBLEPOST=1389054935,1389054911][/DOUBLEPOST]
not a bad idea

I agree. and f you give me your mc name i can do the cartoon

 

[DoodlesPlays]

I agree. and f you give me your mc name i can do the cartoon

BossIRON_MAN69 is my minecraft user, thank you!

 

[thefedoranerd]

How do you record your audio? i would recommend putting your audio through a free program called Audacity and use a feature called normalize. It will allow you to set a DB (decibel) tolerance that will bring down the highs and bring up the lows so you have a very even audio. Your audio has no background noise and that is great but i think this will make your audio super fine.

I will agree with other people saying you are a little stiff with your voice over but that will become natural with time my friend. I think your voice over is much better in your Amnesia videos and if you keep improving you should do great.

Just keep making regular content, keep working on your craft and getting better!

 

[DoodlesPlays]

How do you record your audio? i would recommend putting your audio through a free program called Audacity and use a feature called normalize. It will allow you to set a DB (decibel) tolerance that will bring down the highs and bring up the lows so you have a very even audio. Your audio has no background noise and that is great but i think this will make your audio super fine.

I will agree with other people saying you are a little stiff with your voice over but that will become natural with time my friend. I think your voice over is much better in your Amnesia videos and if you keep improving you should do great.

Just keep making regular content, keep working on your craft and getting better!

Thanks for the feedback! i really appreciate it, and i will try putting my audio through audacity (which i have but have not used yet) and see how it works in an upcoming video soon