Help me by giving feedback!

[Dema_is_boss]

Hey guys! I'm just looking for feedback, and how I can get better. I know i'm not the best youtuber but i'm looking to improve ! So please help me :s ?

Channel : http://www.youtube.com/user/Demaizboss?feature=watch

Thanks !

 

[Zero]

Nice intro music but the length is far too long. Shorten the intro to 5 seconds and pick the best part of the audio to go with it.

The audio you play during the video needs to be much lower as it drowns you out. Make sure your voice is dominant in the audio at all times.

Your text in the banner is behind the avatar picture so that needs to be moved. Your character on the right is also half cut on the right side. The banner just needs some tweaks and it should be good.

At 1,686 subs you are doing quite well for the content you do!