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[Detline]

Hello people . After some feedback I just upgraded my Mic and some stuff in my channel.

I just made a 'lets play' video and I would love it if some people could give me some feedback to my video.
What did I do wrong? Or what did I do good?

All feedback is welcome !

thanks you guys !

 

[javacentral]

I think the energy is good but it took around a minute to get into the gameplay which doesn't bother me but could be a bit of a turn off for some. I do like the commentary though. Telling what's going through you head, your emotions, and just you as yourself is nice.