Great content but having trouble reaching out!

Cub & Stallion

Cub & Stallion

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Currently we have a great database of over 60 videos. My brother and I have a Facebook, Twitter, and an Instagram to spread the word. Is there anyway we can improve? Critical honesty is welcomed please.

 
So, here's a thing, you created a thread called "Great content...." and the first reaction is probably - why is it great? Who said it's great? This kind of attitude is a turn-off for a lot of people, you see.
You posted a video called "A Day that bounces around". There is no indication of what it is about. It's vlog, ok, but what's interesting about it? In first minute you mention something about making money and buying a car, but why should we watch further? It just seems like bragging and gives a very bad vibe.
I scrolled through the channel and it feels like you guys make videos to show people how cool and awesome you are, but it doesn't really work that way. Why should people even bother opening videos when you're not engaging and not friendly?

Who is your channel made for and why would people want to watch your content? Maybe answering these two questions help you improve.
 
nickywickyd said:
So, here's a thing, you created a thread called "Great content...." and the first reaction is probably - why is it great? Who said it's great? This kind of attitude is a turn-off for a lot of people, you see.
You posted a video called "A Day that bounces around". There is no indication of what it is about. It's vlog, ok, but what's interesting about it? In first minute you mention something about making money and buying a car, but why should we watch further? It just seems like bragging and gives a very bad vibe.
I scrolled through the channel and it feels like you guys make videos to show people how cool and awesome you are, but it doesn't really work that way. Why should people even bother opening videos when you're not engaging and not friendly?

Who is your channel made for and why would people want to watch your content? Maybe answering these two questions help you improve.
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