GenerikB Banner: Thoughts?

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BlockDesigns

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Hey guys,

I've recently started a speed art series where I make a banner speed art for the Big youtuber suggested in the comments.
I was wondering what you all thought? There is some very good critiques on here and I wanted to know your opinion!

Heres the finished thing:

GenerikB-Banner_zps3121c3cd.png


If you want to find the speed art, You can check it out on my channel, The youtuber suggested must have over 100,000 subs. So Wreckless Eating may be the only forum member allowed haha.

Thanks,
Chris
 
Banners are a tough one to nail, I'm working on a bunch for other people. All different type's. I guess i'd have to get a feel for the channel, but this is good. Nice one dude :)
 
Wow, that looks amazing! Personally, I would tell you to move your branding to the center. It will only be viewable on desktops with larger screens right now. If I was to open a channel with that on my macbook, I would have no clue who made the art. I do like the design a lot though. Warning: I am about to nitpick to the fullest extent. I love your work, and this is just personal preference. I like the way the top is brighter than the bottom, but their should be a more smooth transition. To the left of the "G" there is a spot where it is very bright, then instantly darker. I think this is a little jarring to look at. Also, the text on the bottom should be a bit bigger imo. Lastly, there seems to be a small white line between the banner and the background (before the shadow) Again, I love your work, and it is better than I could ever do :) Just wanted to give you my extreme critiques. Great job and keep up to good work! :)
 
It looks great imo. Channel art plays a big part in wether a person looks at your channel or not and this would definitely attract me. Nice job! :up:
 
ConnersCraft said:
Wow, that looks amazing! Personally, I would tell you to move your branding to the center. It will only be viewable on desktops with larger screens right now. If I was to open a channel with that on my macbook, I would have no clue who made the art. I do like the design a lot though. Warning: I am about to nitpick to the fullest extent. I love your work, and this is just personal preference. I like the way the top is brighter than the bottom, but their should be a more smooth transition. To the left of the "G" there is a very spot where it is very bright, then instantly darker. I think this is a little jarring to look at. Also, the text on the bottom should be a bit bigger imo. Lastly, there seems to be a small white line between the banner and the background (before the shadow) Again, I love your work, and it is better than I could ever do :) Just wanted to give you my extreme critiques. Great job and keep up to good work! :)
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Thanks man :) Loving the para, I put the line there because i was going to overlay it and make it a partition sorta thing, But then i tried it, and i was like, White looks better lol. It was just lazyness on my part, Yes i do need to fix my channel art, People have told me, Im not used to it as i have 2 dual 1080p monitors lol. Thanks for the feedback :D[DOUBLEPOST=1376780262,1376779856][/DOUBLEPOST]
Crypt said:
It looks great imo. Channel art plays a big part in wether a person looks at your channel or not and this would definitely attract me. Nice job! :up:
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Thanks man, I'm hoping to get lots of suggestions in the comments
 
I recorded another one but it turned out terrible, But im going to record and upload another one today. Tell me what you think! (when its done lol)
 
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