General format and video review request

[TheChallenger]

I have just started a channel called the challenger where I play through games with weird self imposed rules attached. My first video is the start of my stealthless play through of dishonored. All I really want to know is your opinions on the format of the video: the way I handle the intro, the production quality and the challenge gimmick. I have embedded the video into this thread.

I understand that 20 minutes is a long time so thanks for sitting through it.

 

[Trichard]

I like the idea of your challenge it seems fun! I am interested to see what you do with other games in the future.

intro: you were smooth in the delivery of what was going on and not speed talking or monotone and there was excitement in your voice.
(well done for a first intro on a new channel)

production and quality: both were executed well and look fine so you're all good there. you weren't too talkative or not too talkative which was nice =] if that made sense.

the challenge its self I felt for a first video was done really well as the game will in time get a little harder so it will be interesting to see how you handle some of the levels in the game while going full assault

overall?
9/10 -1 for being British jk =p

 

[TheChallenger]

I like the idea of your challenge it seems fun! I am interested to see what you do with other games in the future.

intro: you were smooth in the delivery of what was going on and not speed talking or monotone and there was excitement in your voice.
(well done for a first intro on a new channel)

production and quality: both were executed well and look fine so you're all good there. you weren't too talkative or not too talkative which was nice =] if that made sense.

the challenge its self I felt for a first video was done really well as the game will in time get a little harder so it will be interesting to see how you handle some of the levels in the game while going full assault

overall?
9/10 -1 for being British jk =p

Thanks for taking the time to write back to me. I'm glad to hear that my commentary didn't perter of and that my delivery was acceptable as these were to things that actually had me a little bit uneasy while I was editing the video. Again thanks for taking the time to go through the video and help me improve

 

[Trichard]

Thanks for taking the time to write back to me. I'm glad to hear that my commentary didn't perter of and that my delivery was acceptable as these were to things that actually had me a little bit uneasy while I was editing the video. Again thanks for taking the time to go through the video and help me improve

no worries!

how excited are you for dishonored 2! =] I cant wait

 

[TheChallenger]

no worries!

how excited are you for dishonored 2! =] I cant wait

I'm actually quite hyped about it. I normally don't let myself get to exited about AAA game releases but I just love the way that dishonored handles stealth and more importantly recovering after getting caught (you know when your actually trying to stealth.).

 

[Jawad Soomro]

I think the avatar is cool! I would recommend to put designs in your banner, Red text is cool, but its really small!
WRITE "THE CHALLENGER" in the bold and large text with RED Fonts with White outline should be attractive enough
I think you should place the text in your thumbnails, it would attract more audience
Audio quality is super awesome Video quality as well
Talking power and commentary is amazing
Make Facebook and twitter pages for your channel, so that people can approach you faster
I think you are doing great job! Keep up the good work

 

[TheChallenger]

I think the avatar is cool! I would recommend to put designs in your banner, Red text is cool, but its really small!
WRITE "THE CHALLENGER" in the bold and large text with RED Fonts with White outline should be attractive enough
I think you should place the text in your thumbnails, it would attract more audience
Audio quality is super awesome Video quality as well
Talking power and commentary is amazing
Make Facebook and twitter pages for your channel, so that people can approach you faster
I think you are doing great job! Keep up the good work

as far as thumbnails are concerned I think adding some branding to them is a good idea to make them stand out and the same goes for reworking my banner a bit. It's also good to hear that my commentary wasn't too awful as that was something I was a bit unsure about. When it comes to social networks I'm not to sure what the purpose would be. I have a subscriber base of zero right now as the channel has just started and so there's not much interaction that would happen. I may be missing something but that seems like a for after you build a subscriber base thing (you know like giving your subscribers a collective noun. Please do correct me if I'm wrong though.)