First Vlog Ever Need Feed Back

[DepletedCharge]

Hey, guys. I just started the transition of my channel over to gaming and technology vlogs and I could really use some feed back on what I can improve on. I know that I'll get better with time, but I think that having some feed back would help towards that end a lot. Thanks!

 

[Caber]

I feel that you should move closer to the camera, and maybe sound a bit more energetic A monotone voice definitely bores me, where an energetic voice might make me want to stay. You should also cut out any long pauses, because it'd make the video shorter, make you look better, and keep your viewers from leaving the video because it's too long.

Then again, I'm just stereotyping what Vlogs should be in my eyes... It's really up to you to pick and choose any advice. Pretty good Vlog.

 

[DepletedCharge]

I feel that you should move closer to the camera, and maybe sound a bit more energetic A monotone voice definitely bores me, where an energetic voice might make me want to stay. You should also cut out any long pauses, because it'd make the video shorter, make you look better, and keep your viewers from leaving the video because it's too long.

Then again, I'm just stereotyping what Vlogs should be in my eyes... It's really up to you to pick and choose any advice. Pretty good Vlog.

Thanks, man. I really appreciate it! I'm still getting use to being in front of the camera xD I'll get better and start to sound more energetic over time. But hearing someone say it really helps a lot towards that. Thanks again!

 

[atypicalvideo]

I feel that you should move closer to the camera, and maybe sound a bit more energetic A monotone voice definitely bores me, where an energetic voice might make me want to stay. You should also cut out any long pauses, because it'd make the video shorter, make you look better, and keep your viewers from leaving the video because it's too long.

Then again, I'm just stereotyping what Vlogs should be in my eyes... It's really up to you to pick and choose any advice. Pretty good Vlog.

This and if you want to make more vlogs, I'd suggest working on the lighting, whether it's natural lighting during the day or just a simple lamp.. will improve the camera quality

 

[Caber]

Thanks, man. I really appreciate it! I'm still getting use to being in front of the camera xD I'll get better and start to sound more energetic over time. But hearing someone say it really helps a lot towards that. Thanks again!

No problem, dude. Hope you get a ton of views!