First Gaming video in a WHILE (channel still underconstruction)

[Zannle]

I just uploaded my first public gaming in a LONG while, However the channel art is due to change, what do you think, feedback is appreciated.

 

[Jawad Soomro]

I think the thumbnail of this video is damn awesome but rest of the videos thumbnails should be worked
Banner is pretty cool, but I think that blur guy beside the text looks a less distracting! Thats just my personal opinion
Nice intro and outro
Nice editing and when u make YEAH YEAH Sounds is awesome
All the best dear

 

[Zannle]

I think the thumbnail of this video is damn awesome but rest of the videos thumbnails should be worked
Banner is pretty cool, but I think that blur guy beside the text looks a less distracting! Thats just my personal opinion
Nice intro and outro
Nice editing and when u make YEAH YEAH Sounds is awesome
All the best dear

Thanks!! Really helps

 

[ProjectXerxes]

I think the commentary is good but your graphcis and editing needs a bit of work. I find that the transitions are way to quick

 

[Zannle]

I think the commentary is good but your graphcis and editing needs a bit of work. I find that the transitions are way to quick

Gawd yes, I was looking at the quality and had a bit of a break down, hopefully i upped the recording graphics/game graphics so hopefully that'll help and hopefully i'll keep trying out other editing methods, thanks

 

[NIU]

Hey I like the thumbnail of your latest vid.
Tone down your banner a little bit just since there are so many characters on it, so try to uniform the colors in either Photoshop or GIMP.
Good commentary and I did like your overlay visuals (you gained a sub outta me for it)
Just as before slower transitions, but overall really good video nice job.

 

[Zannle]

Hey I like the thumbnail of your latest vid.
Tone down your banner a little bit just since there are so many characters on it, so try to uniform the colors in either Photoshop or GIMP.
Good commentary and I did like your overlay visuals (you gained a sub outta me for it)
Just as before slower transitions, but overall really good video nice job.

Thanks!! Hopefully i'll get a more relatable.. less busy banner and also like when a transition hits just slow it down or do you mean theres too many?

 

[NIU]

Thanks!! Hopefully i'll get a more relatable.. less busy banner and also like when a transition hits just slow it down or do you mean theres too many?

Just a few of the scene transitions need to be a fraction of a second longer, but that is only being super picky. I really like your editing and graphics it's a really funny video

 

[Zannle]

Just a few of the scene transitions need to be a fraction of a second longer, but that is only being super picky. I really like your editing and graphics it's a really funny video

I'll add a bit more to the transition then, thanks alot

 

[NIU]

I'll add a bit more to the transition then, thanks alot

NP and keep up with the videos you got a great channel going on