Feedback on my video please

[Jack Willcocks]

Hey everyone this is my first compilation iv done and i was wondering if i could get some feedback on it. Would mean alot if i could get some constructive criticism as i want to improve more and more, i really enjoy doing this and also me and my friend playing this both enjoy the game

Any kind of feedback is more than enough thanks for helping

 

[Jennifer Mulkerrin]

One of you is a bit soft, remember to speak up. I don't really like the smiley face cuts in it, takes you out of the video in my opinion.

 

[Jack Willcocks]

oh ok then thanks for telling me that i did the smiley because i wasnt sure what else to do