Feedback on my new video

[Megan Byrne]

My new video, Snow parks and Big Jumps, was really fun to make and i wanted to try and make it as fun to watch as possible.
I made the music and would like to know what other people think of it.

Could i get feedback on the edit, music and thumbnail

Thanks!

 

[Malarki]

I would like to ask you a question first, what do you want to achieve with these videos? Do you want people to get to know you or do you want to show people different places without being the star of the Youtube channel?

I think the music is good for this video. It's good how you use different camera angles. Not just from your GoPro, but also someone filming you on the snowboard. If it was just the GoPro footage it would get boring really soon. The thumbnail is really dark on my screen. Also the top of your head seems to be cut off. Maybe you could also add a title to the thumbnail. I've also watched some of your older videos and I think you really improved on editing. What I miss is some sort of storyline. Of you putting on your snowboard and then take the skilift to the top of the mountain and then snowboard down the mountain. It would be a nice variation of shots.

 

[javacentral]

I think you accomplished what you were going for here, having fun and wanting to share the fun. The editing is very nice and the music is pretty good too.

 

[Megan Byrne]

I would like to ask you a question first, what do you want to achieve with these videos? Do you want people to get to know you or do you want to show people different places without being the star of the Youtube channel?

I think the music is good for this video. It's good how you use different camera angles. Not just from your GoPro, but also someone filming you on the snowboard. If it was just the GoPro footage it would get boring really soon. The thumbnail is really dark on my screen. Also the top of your head seems to be cut off. Maybe you could also add a title to the thumbnail. I've also watched some of your older videos and I think you really improved on editing. What I miss is some sort of storyline. Of you putting on your snowboard and then take the skilift to the top of the mountain and then snowboard down the mountain. It would be a nice variation of shots.

Im not really sure what i want to do yet. I think i want to start making different types of video like reaction video and vlogs but i haven't got the confidence yet!
Ill change the thumbnail to something brighter and with a title. Thank you so much for you advice [DOUBLEPOST=1457883869,1457883847][/DOUBLEPOST]

I think you accomplished what you were going for here, having fun and wanting to share the fun. The editing is very nice and the music is pretty good too.

Thank you so much

 

[Malarki]

Im not really sure what i want to do yet. I think i want to start making different types of video like reaction video and vlogs but i haven't got the confidence yet!
Ill change the thumbnail to something brighter and with a title. Thank you so much for you advice [DOUBLEPOST=1457883869,1457883847][/DOUBLEPOST]
Thank you so much

I think it's difficult for everyone when you first start vlogging. You should take a look at the first videos made by successful Youtubers. They're all incredibly awkward in front of camera, but confidence will grow when you do it more.