Feedback on my intro

Jake103 said:
Look I know their real people and yes u can see the number of how long the average amount of people stay. I just don't get how they don't watch the whole video when I'm not even talking in it. But seriously though when u have a very small channel people don't give u a chance too show them u have good content. All they do is watch some of the video and assume that the rest of the video is crap. Look u need to understand people don't give u a chance and they're like "Oh so this is a small channel I bet the content really sucks" They don't watch the whole video. Also it's not cool on how a 4 minute machinima only has people who watch it for a minute. Once they get bored of the video they just leave well maybe if they watch the whole video they would be entertained. U see why I called them douche bags they don't give u a chance and don't even watch the whole video and think the video sucks just because I'm a small channel. U really need to consider that viewers don't take the time to watch the whole video and assume it sucks.
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I do totally get that. I've been there and still am there. 90% of viewers won't make it to the end of any video they watch. Don't take it to heart. And about not having your voice in your videos that may be a reason for them leaving. Many people won't watch a video if it's just the gameplay because well they may as well just play it themselves. They are looking for you personally to entertain them. Not the game. What you are playing doesn't usually make a massive difference. It's how you play it and what you add to the video in personality, entertainment and style. Also you may want to cut out bit where your just flicking through menus. It looks unprofessional and people will just leave for that.
 
2016 06 22 20 03 31 - Just a black screen video and only 4 seconds long.

Gta san andreas Underground SOL mod (5 days ago) - That music is sooooooo bad, I can't watch it.

The attack of the Vagos - At first I was interested in watching the video, but then it just kept going on and on and there was no story being told or context for what's going on, so I stopped at 1 minute in.

Gta san andreas SOL Underground mod (2 weeks ago) - You recorded this in 3 frames per second? I can't watch this.

Gta Machinima Balla attack - Same as the attack of the Vagos, no story given or narrative so I lost interest.

That was your newest uploaded videos, and none of them help me to stay on your channel or watch your videos.
 
newage said:
2016 06 22 20 03 31 - Just a black screen video and only 4 seconds long.

Gta san andreas Underground SOL mod (5 days ago) - That music is sooooooo bad, I can't watch it.

The attack of the Vagos - At first I was interested in watching the video, but then it just kept going on and on and there was no story being told or context for what's going on, so I stopped at 1 minute in.

Gta san andreas SOL Underground mod (2 weeks ago) - You recorded this in 3 frames per second? I can't watch this.

Gta Machinima Balla attack - Same as the attack of the Vagos, no story given or narrative so I lost interest.

That was your newest uploaded videos, and none of them help me to stay on your channel or watch your videos.
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Look I'm working on a gta 5 machinima that's interesting u can't exactly say that I don't upload enough. U need to understand it takes a lot of time to come up with this and I just posted that so u can have something to watch. Trust me I could do better then that, but it's just that it takes time. Ok now for the Gta San Andreas stuff the latest one well hey I have to find some music for my video or else I can't get audio so that's ur opinion the audio sucks. The 2016 video ok now that was an error with my recording software so technical difficulties. The vagus and the ballas like I said coming up with content for viewers to watch. Also if ur complaining so much can u come up with suggestions for Gta content ? Machinimas take a while to make u know. The Gta San Andreas thing I need to find another recording software that records audio and gets longer recordings. Well for now I'll just record battlefield 4 and some other games.
 
Jake103 said:
... u can't exactly say that I don't upload enough. ...
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I didn't say that. I was showing your newest videos are not going to hold anyone's interest long than the 1 minute mark.

Jake103 said:
... U need to understand it takes a lot of time to come up with this ...
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I understand, it takes me a long time to come up with ideas too.

Jake103 said:
... hey I have to find some music for my video or else I can't get audio so that's ur opinion the audio sucks. ...
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https://www.youtube.com/audiolibrary/music

Jake103 said:
...Machinimas take a while to make u know. ...
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I'm working on a video that's taken me 3 days now, and I won't have it ready till next week. You can take your time, there's no rush in making a good quality video.
 
Yeah.. I agree. I would sharpen up the logo so that it is more clear. It is a quick into..not too long, which is good. And the music is fine! Good luck:)
 
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