Feedback On My Channel Trailer?

[Chaz]

So I know my channel trailer isn't perfect (I was told the audio at the end was kind of screwed up) but I just wanted to know how everyone feels about the rest of my channel trailer. Is it good? Is it funny?

 

[Holy2Lord]

The idea is good, fun, narration goes well but what i didn't like personally is the first picture with the baby and old persons face. I went to your channel and i have to say your banner is awesome, but in the trailer it's kind of ummm how to put it - way too colorful and random(half cartoonish, half real, too many fonts) as if nothing goes together. For instance the other images with the no violence etc etc.. go well with the color and the white text/font. Everything else is nice

 

[Chaz]

The idea is good, fun, narration goes well but what i didn't like personally is the first picture with the baby and old persons face. I went to your channel and i have to say your banner is awesome, but in the trailer it's kind of ummm how to put it - way too colorful and random(half cartoonish, half real, too many fonts) as if nothing goes together. For instance the other images with the no violence etc etc.. go well with the color and the white text/font. Everything else is nice

Thanks I'll keep that in mind for the next one although that won't be for quite some time. The color is suppose to be like that to show its "kid friendly" but idk lol

 

[Holy2Lord]

I know, i said i like the idea and it's nice but it's way too colorful or maybe you need to just make all the text in one color and font. Compared to your channel art and thumbnails which are very good, this just stands out.

 

[Chaz]

I know, i said i like the idea and it's nice but it's way too colorful or maybe you need to just make all the text in one color and font. Compared to your channel art and thumbnails which are very good, this just stands out.

Well... I didnt make the channel art lol