Feedback on my 4th minecraft animation short.

Janno

Janno

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So am I still improving that I'm getting better? ;)
Tryed to create something funnier, I guess I need to work on being funny.

 
First off let me just say this was great! then can i ask you what you use to make the animations?
 
Well, it looks nice, but what's the story behind it? As far as I know, it's a glowy-eyed guy looking at a photo, and he got hit in the head with a shovel for it.

As a person without any prior knowledge, there isn't any real establishing shot of what's going on. As a 3D animation student, you seem to be missing core elements of the story. So far you have an attempt at a backstory, or getting emotion, and then you just whack the guy on the head. No real closure, or even reasons for why things are the way they are.
 
Daemon White said:
Well, it looks nice, but what's the story behind it? As far as I know, it's a glowy-eyed guy looking at a photo, and he got hit in the head with a shovel for it.

As a person without any prior knowledge, there isn't any real establishing shot of what's going on. As a 3D animation student, you seem to be missing core elements of the story. So far you have an attempt at a backstory, or getting emotion, and then you just whack the guy on the head. No real closure, or even reasons for why things are the way they are.
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Yes, I probably need to make seperate episode for it to show why my character hates herobrine (glowy-eyed guy) soo much that he needs to beat him up all the time.
Would be better? ;)
 
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