Feedback Needed!

[BigB0ss]

Hi! I'm new to this forum but have been doing this youtube thing for awhile now, I try to post a video every week. Any feedback on our video would be much appreciated!

This is one of our newest videos:

We're already saving up money for a better camera, a tripod, reflectors, and maybe a green screen.
Any comments about the writing/editing/whatever are welcomed and very much needed lol.

 

[Jorge N]

Hi! I'm new to this forum but have been doing this youtube thing for awhile now, I try to post a video every week. Any feedback on our video would be much appreciated!

This is one of our newest videos:

We're already saving up money for a better camera, a tripod, reflectors, and maybe a green screen.
Any comments about the writing/editing/whatever are welcomed and very much needed lol.

Hey I'd say work on your thumbnails a little better that tends to attract viewers ! Also your titles these two things are crucial ! But channel is looking good just keep on uploading those videos every video will only make you better !