Feedback needed!

[Sir Stellar]

Hey guys so i recently uploaded my second video to youtube. My channel is based around stories of mylife with a funny twist to them (i hope they're funny XD). I would really appreciate if you can give me any feedback on my channel, so i could see what i need to change up or what i need to keep on doing. I overall need constructive feedback. It will be really appreciated

 

[Nirushan]

I love the video,even though its not in full screen you have a good commentary voice over gameplay, so i think you should do more of that.If it's possible could you give some feedback on my channel.
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCz14sJkGt6-OyupisQZUaSg

 

[Leon B. Ward]

Hey Guys I've created a new channel, plus two videos! the ONLY problem is, the links wont work on my main page... here's the link to the channel and to two videos... plus i want feedback on the second video
as I used a wireless LAV for the audio.. https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCVJm_ZC7fWMb5n5ebWITFNw

 

[iMSaiyan]

Hey Guys I've created a new channel, plus two videos! the ONLY problem is, the links wont work on my main page... here's the link to the channel and to two videos... plus i want feedback on the second video
as I used a wireless LAV for the audio.. https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCVJm_ZC7fWMb5n5ebWITFNw

I don' think you are supposed to request feedback on someone else's feedback post..[DOUBLEPOST=1468500608,1468500582][/DOUBLEPOST]

I don' think you are supposed to request feedback on someone else's feedback post..

Unless you are the same guy...? Which would be confusing.

 

[Leon B. Ward]

iMSaiyan no I'm not the same guy, just wanted people to notice my channel and get to know more people that's all... plus I'm still new to this LOL!