Feedback for Valentines Guide :))

Kadelle13

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^ this is my latest video. I am really happy with it cos I tried some new editing features, but of course, things can ALWAYS be improved so please please let me know what you think! :)

Thanks in advance
xx Katie
 
The DIY bits weren't the most creative or interesting. I was concerned when you advised that I "pop" the balloons onto the wall D: The dessert sounds tasty, and I like that you kept the mason jar+ribbon theme between that and the candles. I think that continuing that theme with the other decor would be an improvement, like jars filled with candy hearts or pom poms or glitter or whatever. The DVD suggestions are fine. My favourite Valentine's Day movie is Valentine, a movie about this bullied kid gets revenge on the girls who wouldn't dance with him in grade 6 or something lol. Aesthetically there's nothing wrong with your video. good angles, light, etc. good pacing.
 
The DIY bits weren't the most creative or interesting. I was concerned when you advised that I "pop" the balloons onto the wall D: The dessert sounds tasty, and I like that you kept the mason jar+ribbon theme between that and the candles. I think that continuing that theme with the other decor would be an improvement, like jars filled with candy hearts or pom poms or glitter or whatever. The DVD suggestions are fine. My favourite Valentine's Day movie is Valentine, a movie about this bullied kid gets revenge on the girls who wouldn't dance with him in grade 6 or something lol. Aesthetically there's nothing wrong with your video. good angles, light, etc. good pacing.

Thank you so much for taking the time to watch and comment on the various aspects of my video :))
Yeah, the DIY lights aren't too original I guess, seeing there are sooo many mason jar DIYs out there. But I had to recycle my pickle jars :'D
The other jar ideas you mentioned sound cool!
Nice :D Yeah I'm watching My Bloody Valentine and Valentine with my bf tonight :) High five haha

Thanks again :) Really appreciate it!
 
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