The DIY bits weren't the most creative or interesting. I was concerned when you advised that I "pop" the balloons onto the wall D: The dessert sounds tasty, and I like that you kept the mason jar+ribbon theme between that and the candles. I think that continuing that theme with the other decor would be an improvement, like jars filled with candy hearts or pom poms or glitter or whatever. The DVD suggestions are fine. My favourite Valentine's Day movie is Valentine, a movie about this bullied kid gets revenge on the girls who wouldn't dance with him in grade 6 or something lol. Aesthetically there's nothing wrong with your video. good angles, light, etc. good pacing.