(Editing) Thoughts, what you would have done, etc. [Overwatch vid]

[Kamisaa]

Hey guys, would love to get some feedback on my recent video. Has no commentary and it's basically a mash of mei gameplay and PonPonPon by Kyary Pamyu Pamyu.

I'm new to adobe premiere pro and basically learning as I go on, so i'd love for some tips/feedback on what you would've done in my situation, how the pacing of the video is, maybe if there's too many scene switches, etc.

Just tell me your honest thoughts please,
Thanks a lot guys

Video here :

 

[newage]

I think the dancing part of the music video is fine in the beginning, but as the video goes on I kinda wish it would stop. The music in the background is fine, it's just jarring to go back and forth between the two.
At the 1:40 mark, that's how it feels like the video should be through out the entire thing.

 

[Kamisaa]

I think the dancing part of the music video is fine in the beginning, but as the video goes on I kinda wish it would stop. The music in the background is fine, it's just jarring to go back and forth between the two.
At the 1:40 mark, that's how it feels like the video should be through out the entire thing.

Thanks mate i feel what you mean, it's something I need to work on with all of my videos. I did make a short ver, but thought i'd get the longer one critiqued on.

 

[Olroy]

I'm more just.....confused lol, what did I just watch. Now I understand what people are talking about in my own comment sections lol, I've made a few videos like this that have gotten quite a few views, although they're league of legends not overwatch