Editing help!

[PleasurePadJack]

I have a segment called Pick My Achievement (PMA) which is I try and get an Xbox achievement or what ever achievement that you guys choose for me to do. My first plan was to not edit anything out and play it from start to finish but not sure if this will be very good.
So I am asking you guys to help me out and give me some of your opinions on how you think I should edit this which would be better for you to watch.

 

[Lanorc]

keep the good bits in the best bits and so on, and the not so interesting.. well cut it away boom

 

[MsFancyBear]

Keep the good parts in

 

[PleasurePadJack]

Thanks I will try to edit them. But the video on my channel is unedited and not really sure how to edit it to keep it good.