Editing, cut and content quality

[TheIntoxicatedGnomeArmy]

Hello ^^
I am really un-sure about the quality of my content, I haven't posted or edited anything in a long time and I was wandering if you could review my video?
I would like to know how I can improve in terms of the Editing, If cuts seem to fit together and if the content is actually worth putting up?
Please help :3

~ many thanks
IntoxicatedGnome

 

[DeadMerchant]

Your cuts are fine but I noticed a lot of pixelation in your video. What program do you use to edit? Sony Vegas im guessing?

 

[Jawad Soomro]

I would recommend to put the BOLD WHITE text in your thumbnail, it will be nice
The video quality is poor, it the pixels are not clear, hope u will use the better software
Intro and outro are recommended
The audio quality is nice
Background noise is there, u should use audacity or other software to remove the noise
Promote your videos on social media
All the best

 

[TheIntoxicatedGnomeArmy]

Your cuts are fine but I noticed a lot of pixelation in your video. What program do you use to edit? Sony Vegas im guessing?

Surprisingly I am poor so use the dreaded windows essentials stuff D: I record using over wolf but in this case i exported stuff from a stream I did on to twitch into this video which might explain the pixels?
If you know of any good free editing stuff I would be thankful?