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Firstly, your thumbnails are amazing, they look like professional ones. Also, your banner and logo look really neat and nice, but perhaps it's time for a change?

Your commentary is funny but on a few videos I hear a humming of a machine (possibly your PC) in the background and it's a tad annoying, maybe just fix that? The video and mic quality is amazing though. Your MC audio on some videos isn't very loud, maybe boost that.

Also, I can sometimes hear your mouse clicks and to be fair, I had this problem too, so I changed my mouse, but I also still have it with my keyboard. I know you've said you can't fix it, but in the future that's one thing you could do.

Overall, your channel is funny, maybe now make social network profiles to boost your content and then you'll be on your way!

Thanks! Hope my review is okay... :P
 
Swany407 said:
Thank you for the review! That's the stuff I want to hear!

I checked out your channel and watched a few videos. The video quality and audio is great, however the gameplay itself is not the most enjoyable to watch. This may be because you don't seem to enjoy playing the game too much. You are great at commentating and being able to talk for the whole 20 or so minutes, but it almost feels like you are just making a video to make one.

Also, thumbnails. When you make yours, make sure you can read what the game is. If someone is looking for a video to watch, they may just be looking at the thumbnail. On yours, the words are very small.

You have a great channel and I love that you are yourself in your videos, something a lot of people don't do. Keep up the work man.

-Swany407
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Hey man thanks, could you give me examples of a vid of where I sound like I don't enjoy the game?
 
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Channel Art- Your thumbnails as mention before look really professional. As well as your channel banner and profile picture. In that category you are doing very well.

Audio: In some of your videos I notice some background noise that can sort of drown your commentary out. I think your audio would improve drastically if you could edit that out of your videos.

Commentary: The biggest thing I notice was it seemed that you were excited to be giving the commentary. Which for me is a big deal, I can’t stand watching someone who isn’t enthusiastic in their videos. So good job in your commentaries of presenting yourself enthusiastically with that persona.

Overall: You produce really good content that I myself would watch. You just need to improve your audio in regards to the background noise. Your mic seems fine just the noise in the background drowns you out.
 
Swany407 said:
Great feedback man! The noise you hear in my videos is my laptop running. I really have no way of changing my set up to move my laptop and still use my mic and play. However, since you mentioned how it bothers you, I will look into ways of fixing that. Thank you for that information!

Alright first off, I love that you have a logo and a brand to your name already ( I'm talking about the snow flake and wintery theme). While watching a couple of different videos, the two things that I would suggest changing (but ever so slightly) is your intro. The digital intro is great, but just a few seconds too long. However, in those few extra seconds, you may lose the attention of a new viewer. First impressions are everything, even on Youtube! I would suggest shortening from the approximate ten seconds to about 5. For your actual intro to the gameplay, I love how you are energetic and entusiastic, however it is very hard to understand what you are staying.

Keep making videos man, I see subscribers in your future:)

-Swany407
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Is all your commentary live comm? or is it recorded after the fact? And thanks for the feedback I appreciate it! and yeah I def need a new intro.
 
Swany407 said:
Hey guys,

I am open to review any of your channels and give honest feedback. All I ask in return is you do the same for mine. Let me know what you don't like, what I could improve on, and most importantly, give comepletly honest criticism! Although we don't always want to hear it, its better to hear what we are not doing well in order to improve.

I will return the feedback as fast as I possibly can!

Thanks everyone,

Swany407
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I like what you're doing with your channel. You are an entertaining commentator and seem very comfortable on the mic. Both video and audio quality are excellent. One thing that you might consider working on is your branding. Your thumbnails look great, but it would be better if you had some sort of logo that was unique and immediately recognizable on each thumbnail, so viewer can associate the videos with your channel. You could also add some sections to your front page showcasing some of the different series you have going, so people can easily find stuff that they are looking for. Overall your channel is very good.

Could you take a look at our channel? Any feedback is appreciated. Thanks!
 
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