Critique on my Gaming Videos?

[KeniisuYT]

Could I receive some critique and feedback on my Latest Video as I've really wanted to become better at it. It's a short video, but I'd love to know the areas in which I can improve and work towards bettering my channel's content and commentating skills.

 

[newage]

No branding in your video? Logo, call to action or watch previous videos, nothing?

The video feels like it's running at something lower than 30-60 fps. What software did you record with?

As far as the voice over, there are a few things. Confidence level seems a little low, "Sorry guys, I'm new to this". Saying what you're doing, "ok we're starting the game now guys" and "Ok zoom out a little bit here". We can all see what you're doing.

Tell us something interesting, be entertaining, educate us on the inner workings of the game. What do you hate about the game? what do you like about the game? Do something different, be unique, surprise us, motivate us to want to play.

 

[KeniisuYT]

No branding in your video? Logo, call to action or watch previous videos, nothing?

The video feels like it's running at something lower than 30-60 fps. What software did you record with?

As far as the voice over, there are a few things. Confidence level seems a little low, "Sorry guys, I'm new to this". Saying what you're doing, "ok we're starting the game now guys" and "Ok zoom out a little bit here". We can all see what you're doing.

Tell us something interesting, be entertaining, educate us on the inner workings of the game. What do you hate about the game? what do you like about the game? Do something different, be unique, surprise us, motivate us to want to play.

Thanks for the critique. I could certainly improve on the commentary for the third episode (second's pre-recorded.) so thanks a lot on those tips. I could try to be a bit more entertaining and describe my feelings a lot more than I do, as perhaps I come off more dull than I do to others that know me personally. Confidence is something I'm going to need to work on a bit, but I could try to relax and just talk about the game and my thoughts, rather than what's happening more often. Anyways, thanks regardless for the advice and I'll do my best to work on the points you made.

Also, I use Bandicam at High Priority. (I capped it to only peak 24 FPS.)
EDIT: I originally had a Call-To-Action but I'll have to revise it for the Third Episode,

 

[newage]

Also, I use Bandicam at High Priority. (I capped it to only peak 24 FPS.)

Use Open Broadcast Software - obsproject.com You wanna let it record at 60fps on PC.

... I could try to be a bit more entertaining and describe my feelings a lot more than I do, as perhaps I come off more dull than I do to others that know me personally. Confidence is something I'm going to need to work on a bit, but I could try to relax and just talk about the game and my thoughts, rather than what's happening more often. ...

Try writing down some points you want to touch on in each video, or even write out a script if you really want. That will help you sound more confident.