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AtomicMonkey

AtomicMonkey

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Hey guy I want to start making cinematic and short stories in game. I will post a link to my first video ( A trailer ) once it has been rendered and up loaded to my YouTube channel.
But I want to hear feedback on what you like and didn't like. This will help me create better content and see what I'm doing right.
I'd really appreciate the comments both bad and good so don't be scared to say something but be respectful please.


-FYI I've had to do audio swap as I had a copy right strike.


-Thanks in advance, Atomic
 
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Just letting you know there's a Channel Reviews & Feedback Forum you can put this in.

Second, your channel link doesn't work.
 
1) Start filling up your channel with playlists or Latest Uploads.
2) The M in your intro isn't working well.
3) Could shorten your FTB videos to show the funniest or best moments of it, usually to at least half if not less of what the raw video is (like how I in Pixelmoncraft did cuts of me killing zombies and creepers with pokeballs).
4) The MadMax trailer... what exactly was the purpose? Just wondering.
 
"]1) Start filling up your channel with playlists or Latest Uploads.
2) The M in your intro isn't working well.
3) Could shorten your FTB videos to show the funniest or best moments of it, usually to at least half if not less of what the raw video is (like how I in Pixelmoncraft did cuts of me killing zombies and creepers with pokeballs).
4) The MadMax trailer... what exactly was the purpose? Just wondering."

Yes I understand that the FTB episode were a bit long and raw they are early episodes so i didn't know much about editing and stuff. and The MadMax trailer is just to let them know that I will be uploading some MadMax content but following a story that I'm working on
 
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