Criticize my commentary!!

[ABoxOfToast]

Yeah we've found it helpful to be like "okay if all else fails maybe we can spark a conversation off of SUBJECT" and then once we start talking we just go off of that going on random tangents some times xD, btw that game disco dodgeball looks amazing where did you get it?

theres a link to get it in the first vid also you can vote for it on steam greenlight!

 

[DoodlesPlays]

i enjoyed your videos quite a bit acctually all i can say is keep em coming!

 

[Perspective]

I feel like you should shorten your titles/ make them more creative but otherwise looking good!