Critical Analysis Needed (Preferably From A Gamer)

[Faraz]

hey guys i just wanted some analysis on ways i can improve on my gaming channel, e.g am i funny, Are my videos good quality etc. my main focus is to make people laugh or smile so if i did do that then i know im going on the right path.

thanks for the support

 

[SpookyWagons]

I think your video was good, but don't ask people to like/sub in first minute. You should leave it until the end. And I would also recommend cutting your video, and skipping some parts because the video is a little long. I don't really watch pack opening etc, but for a starting channel having long videos is not really beneficial since some people wont watch it until the end. If people don't watch your videos until the end you are less likely to get recommended on other peoples channels(youtube recommends channels if their content is good and if their videos are watched fully on avg). I hope this helps, I left a like .

 

[Faraz]

I think your video was good, but don't ask people to like/sub in first minute. You should leave it until the end. And I would also recommend cutting your video, and skipping some parts because the video is a little long. I don't really watch pack opening etc, but for a starting channel having long videos is not really beneficial since some people wont watch it until the end. If people don't watch your videos until the end you are less likely to get recommended on other peoples channels(youtube recommends channels if their content is good and if their videos are watched fully on avg). I hope this helps, I left a like .

thanks for the advice ill try to make my videos shorter , ill also check out your videos