Could Use Some Feedback On Our Very First Skit?

TheRealRyanMickens

TheRealRyanMickens

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Hey everyone! We met up with our friend Chris from CkTv and did our very first skit! This is about going to a friends house who cooks nasty food, something we've all probably experienced every now and then!

It would be great if you could leave us some feedback because we plan on doing more skits in the future and would like to know which aspects we can improve on! From camera quality, to the audio, to the music, and even better lines to make it funnier.

We'd appreciate any feedback and thank you for taking the time to read this :D!

 
I was just thinking, when the guy put the seasoning there, I think it would be funny to make a closeup of the bowl, stop the music and figure how to make the "soup" bubble for a few seconds and then continue like it never happened or you could just drop the whole bottle of seasoning inside haha. Cliche I know but it works ^^

The knife bit was funny, like really funny (for me best part in the skit). The lines between the brothers seems a bit awkward at times and their expression looks like they were about to laugh or was happy rather then getting p****d throughout the skit but yea~ The story was funny and the guy that cooked did a great job with his expressions.

Overall I still think the skit was funny. ^^

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Also! *cough* a few closeups and change in camera angles would definitely make the skit more dynamic I think. I could be wrong and it would be more effort but yea~ Good luck! :)
 
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TheMickensBros said:
Hey everyone! We met up with our friend Chris from CkTv and did our very first skit! This is about going to a friends house who cooks nasty food, something we've all probably experienced every now and then!

It would be great if you could leave us some feedback because we plan on doing more skits in the future and would like to know which aspects we can improve on! From camera quality, to the audio, to the music, and even better lines to make it funnier.

We'd appreciate any feedback and thank you for taking the time to read this :D!

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your going places... :D
 
Antonio Villalobos said:
Funny stuff XD
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SORRYYYYYY for the extremely late reply :(! lol we're normally on top of things but we took a little break from the youtube scene altogether! lol but glad that u enjoyed this Antonio![DOUBLEPOST=1441079674,1441079621][/DOUBLEPOST]
wazooh Games said:
your going places... :D
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Sorry for the late a** reply lol we haven't been too active on youtube as we took a little break :/! But glad that you enjoyed it and see a future for us with this lol :p! Thanks a ton![DOUBLEPOST=1441079897][/DOUBLEPOST]
wasabiroots said:
I was just thinking, when the guy put the seasoning there, I think it would be funny to make a closeup of the bowl, stop the music and figure how to make the "soup" bubble for a few seconds and then continue like it never happened or you could just drop the whole bottle of seasoning inside haha. Cliche I know but it works ^^

The knife bit was funny, like really funny (for me best part in the skit). The lines between the brothers seems a bit awkward at times and their expression looks like they were about to laugh or was happy rather then getting p****d throughout the skit but yea~ The story was funny and the guy that cooked did a great job with his expressions.

Overall I still think the skit was funny. ^^

Edit:

Also! *cough* a few closeups and change in camera angles would definitely make the skit more dynamic I think. I could be wrong and it would be more effort but yea~ Good luck! :)
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We're extremely sorry for such a late reply!!!! Haven't been on youtube as much as we would like! but thanks so much for taking the time to leave us feedback :D! it means a ton!

lol ya that sounds like it would've actually been a great idea to have the soup bubble and a close up! lol the dropping the bottle inside would've been nice too! Sounds funny! We're definitely thinking of doing more skits in the future and its ideas like these that would help!

Glad u enjoyed the knife part :D! And lol ya this was tough for us cuz 1) it was our first skit :/! And 2) we were actually laughing after all the parts

lol but we definitely are going to work on that! Ya Chris did a really great job ! He's an acting legend!

Thanks a ton for all the feedback again! And we'll definitely be working on all these things, especially our expressions in future skits! Thanks!
 
Awesome skit, very funny :) hopefully I will be able to share my content soon! and get some feedback on my vids:)
 
Here is a real review:
started slow but sounds funny at the moment.
Overall I found it funny but got bored when I got about 1/3 of the way
Maybe make the skits a bit shorter?
 
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