Could someone review my gaming channel ?

[RageFocus]

So I've started a channel a long time ago, although it has been a bit inactive I am picking up the activity again. But since I want to make Youtube a bigger part of my life I'd like to know if what I'm doing is good so, please check it out if you have time it's really apreciated. Anything that comes to mind please do tell, like my pronounciation (I'm not english or American but you can probably hear that).

 

[thefedoranerd]

Good audio, intro is nice but you guys need to talk more and with more emotion in your voice. When your angry you need to show it in your voice by raising it. I think you have a long road a head of you just because there are so many game play channels out there.

Good luck!

 

[RageFocus]

Good audio, intro is nice but you guys need to talk more and with more emotion in your voice. When your angry you need to show it in your voice by raising it. I think you have a long road a head of you just because there are so many game play channels out there.

Good luck!

Thanks, yeah we are working on the commenting we're both a pretty laid back shy kind off person so it's hard to get into "acting".