Could I Get Some Feedback On My Audio Editing?

[Mithril]

Bleh, I don't have a lot of audio editing experience, but my entire channel is based on audio (hooray...). Could I have some feedback on my latest vid? It's in the sig below. Thanks!

 

[TSB_Negaman]

I think you have some pretty good sound and a nice reading voice.. You did good with atmosphere in the video the only feedback I can give is maybe to add pictures of other things you describe like when glass breaks. Add a photo of glass breaking and then back to the creepy pasta.. All in all its really good! Thanks for the nightmare fuel! XD