Correct title and a definite description - need help!

partyboyu

partyboyu

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Hello,
Please guidance on the title and of descriptions for the example given:
/watch?v=GeaIgtOziDw

The video is already on youtube about 2.5 years and has only a little over 100 impressions.
I would that ye have helped me in determining what I'm doing wrong and creating the title of a definite description,
in the hope of clues will help me with my other films.

Thank you for any help :)
 
partyboyu said:
Hello,
Please guidance on the title and of descriptions for the example given:
/watch?v=GeaIgtOziDw

The video is already on youtube about 2.5 years and has only a little over 100 impressions.
I would that ye have helped me in determining what I'm doing wrong and creating the title of a definite description,
in the hope of clues will help me with my other films.

Thank you for any help :)
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The title seems ok to me, you also seem to be doing pretty good at 1,877 subs so your other videos can't be doing that bad :).

For the description you could maybe say where the event is taking place, give an introduction to the event and try to structure the car specs better.
 
I like to think of the description almost like a blog post, and come to think of it it actually is with an accompanying video too. Write what's on your mind and what's on the video.
 
Moving this to the reviews section since you are looking for advice where we need to review the video :)
 
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