Collab and review?

[Swecam]

Im looking for someone to collab with that does simular things to what I am doing. You can watch my video, and if you se something you like you can contact me.

And for everyone else, please review it. Always appriciate a helping hand!

 

[Jake_Mistake]

It's an alright video but it could use a lot of touch up. First off an intro would be nice in addition to the silent introduction with the train ride you've given. Also the music that starts in the video starts very abruptly, might want to consider fading in that audio track to have it come up more smoothly. Also maybe an outro would be something to look into because right now it frankly seems as though (and I know this probably isn't the case) that you didn't put too much effort into the beginning and end of the video.