Channel trailer for my let's play channel

Godafoss94

Godafoss94

Fast speaking Dutchman
Heya guys! Today I made a trailer for my channel where I do let's plays, and I wanted to show it to you guys.
(I assume I'm allowed to post it in this subforum, because it's a trailer for a gaming channel. If it's the wrong place, then I apologise).


I would love to hear what you think about it. :D
 
Quite nice!
I have a few suggestions, obviously totally up to you, but here goes. ;)

Don't be afraid to cut bits out. Snappy videos are what trailers really need to thrive. I would personally cut it up so that you say:
"Well hello there ladies and gentlemen" *cut* "My name is Godafoss94 and welcome to my channel"
Then after you say 'welcome to my channel' - start the Skyrim video, but continue the narration in the background.
"If you like flying bandits" "WOAH! Hahaha" *cut* "Look at him fly!" *cut* start the Amnesia video with the narration in the background.
"Scary monsters." "Oooh, I don't think he's following us anymore" "Don't turn around, don't even turn around." "OH NONONAOHWDOAHWaoidhioahwd"
Start the dog video, again narration in the background to introduce clip.
"Or even cute puppies."
Then after that game play clip, cut to you holding your dog - maybe telling it that the dog you just hit over the head in the game wasn't real, turning your eyes towards the camera awkwardly near the end. *cut*
"If you like any of these things, then sit back, maybe eat some dancing pie" *cut to dancing pie*
"And join me in some interesting adventures... I hope to see you again soon, Goodbye!"

I apologise for the large mess above - as well as my possibly unwanted suggestions.
Still enjoyed the video, just giving it some tempo would jazz it up. =)
 
Intelligic said:
Quite nice!
I have a few suggestions, obviously totally up to you, but here goes. ;)

Don't be afraid to cut bits out. Snappy videos are what trailers really need to thrive. I would personally cut it up so that you say:
"Well hello there ladies and gentlemen" *cut* "My name is Godafoss94 and welcome to my channel"
Then after you say 'welcome to my channel' - start the Skyrim video, but continue the narration in the background.
"If you like flying bandits" "WOAH! Hahaha" *cut* "Look at him fly!" *cut* start the Amnesia video with the narration in the background.
"Scary monsters." "Oooh, I don't think he's following us anymore" "Don't turn around, don't even turn around." "OH NONONAOHWDOAHWaoidhioahwd"
Start the dog video, again narration in the background to introduce clip.
"Or even cute puppies."
Then after that game play clip, cut to you holding your dog - maybe telling it that the dog you just hit over the head in the game wasn't real, turning your eyes towards the camera awkwardly near the end. *cut*
"If you like any of these things, then sit back, maybe eat some dancing pie" *cut to dancing pie*
"And join me in some interesting adventures... I hope to see you again soon, Goodbye!"

I apologise for the large mess above - as well as my possibly unwanted suggestions.
Still enjoyed the video, just giving it some tempo would jazz it up. =)
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Haha, don't worry man, tips and suggestions are always welcome! No one's perfect, there's always room to improve, so I'm happy with your suggestions. :] (and hey - I asked what you think about it, would be weird if I got annoyed at you for giving me suggestions, wouldn't it? xP)
For the time being, I'm happy enough with the trailer. However, when I've got more content on my channel, I'm certainly making another trailer to show off that content as well. And when I do make that trailer, I'll definitely keep your suggestions in mind and make use of them!
 
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