Its_Errelevant
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Looking for some feedback. If you have a moment. I would really appreciate it if you could check out my channel
I really like the presentation of your channel. Thumbnails, profile picture and background all look professional and great.
I watched part one of your Horizon video and enjoyed it. Video and audio quality is good. I also enjoyed your commentary. The only comment I could make was the swearing was a bit excessive in parts. I've got nothing against swearing in gaming commentaries, I'd just recommend using swearing to emphasise something, rather than constantly. It gives it more of an impact when you do swear and help make something funnier, or stand out.
Have to say, great work. Your passion is infectious. Good luck!
Thanks Reo,
Yea i need to watch my mouth. Unfortunately its harder than it seems. I set out to make videos without swearing so often, but i never really notice until the editing. Alas by the time i get to edit, I've recorded for hours and going back to replay the game wouldn't produce a genuine response. I really appreciate the feedback and ask that you might check in on me in the future to see my progress.
On a side note, I checked out your channel. I'm a huge history channel fan, and you remind me of it. The information is constant and to the point. Your tone is easy to listen to and your accent makes it seem professional ( if that makes sense lol ). Also my fiance is a big fan of the "Story telling" multi choice games. So she enjoyed your wolf among us video and now wants to buy it lol.
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Well, thank you my friend. I was very serious about her wanting to buy it, because she now owns it... Also if you have ever seen a game called "Fire Watch" it's along that same narrative, and from watching her play it seems really good. Keep up the good work, I'll be looking forward to more videos from you!Yeah, I can understand that. It didn't damage the product, it was more a way of improving on what you have already got. I'll definitely be following your progress, really liked how you've started out your channel.
Thank you for the feedback. Glad that my Aussie accent came in handy for something, ahaha. Awesome that your fiance enjoyed the Wolf Among Us video too, I'd have to recommend it. Not only has it got some pretty cool themes, it is just a whole lot of fun. One of my playthroughs of it was a few years ago with some mates and some beers, where we tried to be the biggest ******* we could. That was a good night.