Carefully Articulated and Developed Style Needs Observations and Criticism

[Aron Kawaiiski]

I would very much enjoy a review on my channel's theme as a whole, seeing how despite being just "another gaming channel".

I like to think that despite currently having 3 separated series, that they are all connected with the help of my intros, outros, and what have you.

Basically my entire channel is divided into colors, with each series being given a different color, the color effects the thumbnail and the ski at the start of each video in the intro.

If you would be so kind as to take a quick look at my channel art, thumbnails, as well as intros, and outros.

Then just give me a general feel of what you thought as well as of course criticism and advice.

*pants*

That was a lot to say!

This would mean quite a bit for a channel starting out like myself! Thanks!

 

[Mithril]

I like your thumbnails! Colorful and fun The banner is very good and the avatar is very good. The trailer is actually pretty funny and epic, but in the "Cacophony of Cynics" part, it's a bit too long and obviously loops the same sound over again. So that's a bit meh. Also, watching your first video, it seems like you're trying a bit too hard. And you might be too close to the microphone because there's distortion in the sound when you get a little loud. Good luck on your channel!

 

[Aron Kawaiiski]

I like your thumbnails! Colorful and fun The banner is very good and the avatar is very good. The trailer is actually pretty funny and epic, but in the "Cacophony of Cynics" part, it's a bit too long and obviously loops the same sound over again. So that's a bit meh. Also, watching your first video, it seems like you're trying a bit too hard. And you might be too close to the microphone because there's distortion in the sound when you get a little loud. Good luck on your channel!

Fair enough, fair enough. All valid points.

I am rather fine with the looping feel to the channel trailer, it was somewhat unavoidable, seeing how the alternative would require far more work and this trailer is only temporary.

I also suppose because it was my first episode I had nothing to base it off, and trying to keep up good commentary, catch the interests of people, talk about the game, as well as focus all at the same time is easier said than done, but I feel I improved quite a bit in the coming episodes.

Currently looking into audio, and have some new setting ideas and what not to make it sound oh so lovely.

Thank you kindly for the criticism.