Can you review my first review please?

[TheBossman]

So this here is my first review I have done on my channel properly (for a full released game). I didn't do as well as I hoped but I want to know if that is me being over cynical of myself or I do sound like I am reading heavily from a script. I talk fast due to where I am from so please forgive that lol.

Be as harsh as you want, I am here to learn and need to know if my content fell from a cows behind.

Thanks in advance