Can i get some feedback pleaseeee

Uncle Eggnog

Uncle Eggnog

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Hey guys, Uncle Eggnog here..

I have been struggling to get any traffic to my channel, im lucky to get 4 views a DAY at the most and i'ts so hard for me to grow because im not getting any feedback or anything from youtubers who watch my content.

So im asking you guys, could you please help me out here!

I think myself of kind of funny because i get so scared easy but the downside is my mic isnt the best and the lighting could be a bit better. Anyway please let me know what you think :)!

 
Over all i think this video is good but i think there are a few things that stick out to me that can make your videos better.
1. you need better thumbnails, the one you used is really lack luster.
2. your camera footage is too low, you can barely see your face and reactions are the best part of lets plays.
3. I can tell you hold back your reactions at points, don't the bigger the reaction the better.

Your audio is good and you keep up a good commentary.

Keep up the good work and maybe work on your branding a bit more.
 
yeah alot of that happened in the first month, this month i think ive gained 20 at the most :([DOUBLEPOST=1473445512,1473364892][/DOUBLEPOST]Oh i forgot to say, what do people think of the audio? do i need to work on that?
 
I thought the audio was solid. I think you're doing a great job at this rate, try to remember not to compare yourself to others. As long as you're growing view by view, it's progress.

That EliteTowerStudios person, they had a good point. Your thumbnails could use some work. They don't draw a person in like they should, which is crappy because it's underselling your great videos. Remember, that's your DVD art, your book cover, you gotta help the visual thinking people something to grasp.
*There's tons of people who can give you tips on your thumbnails and I'm not an expert, so you're better off finding it.

If I had any extra advice, it would be to have fun when talking to your camera. It's a richer experience when the audience feels like you're talking to them, so try not to repeat yourself and stay casual. Think about it, the 'spirit of the viewer' came over to your house to watch you play, deyz in YO hood. Stay cool.

BUT yeah, like I started with, I think you're doing a great job! I subbed and I'mma get back to you at a later date about a show I'd like to feature you on. Gg, bro.
 
Your video isn't bad at all man! I suggest you maybe add a little more lighting to your webcam video, and also get a higher quality capture card that records in a higher frame rate. This will thus look more appealing to the eye and make your video look much better. You got a great presonality though, keep it up man :)
 
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