Can i get feedback on my new video?

[xPotato]

Hi! I just uploaded my new video, an ETS2 (Euro Truck Simulator 2) timelapse. I want to know, if my editing was good, and was the quality good also. Thank you
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[Jack Swish]

Hey Dude, try and stand away from the mic so that we don't hear you breathing. At the start, you should speak to the camera rather than just having a message on there.

 

[xPotato]

Hey Dude, try and stand away from the mic so that we don't hear you breathing. At the start, you should speak to the camera rather than just having a message on there.

Yeah but everyone hates my face (trust me, i have done youtube in Finnish before, i didnt get 1 like, ever). But thanks for the tips! I will try to keep my mic away from my face xD
But thanks still

 

[NeonCinema]

Id say that you should improve your outro, make it 'pop' out at the viewer, this would encourage them to continue browsing through your content

 

[cioflix]