Burnt Papyrus TV

[Mr Stephen]

Hi all,

I would like to request a channel review from you lovely, lovely people. The channel in question is:

https://www.youtube.com/user/BurntPapyrusTV
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What I am really looking for is some information about the content of the videos and how we're promoting it.

As far as things I am already aware of, I know the following needs looking at:

• We have no channel intro
• The intro on the older videos is quite long
• Occasionally we post stuff that doesn't seem to relate to the main vlog

I have changed the intro for the videos over the last few weeks and started to use Cards and Annotations. The format has changed slightly. I would like to know if what I am doing now is better and what you all think could be improved. I would also like to know about video quality (which alters completely from week to week at the moment). Was this weeks (the Easter video) good enough?

All the best,

Mr Stephen