Greetings and Salutations from The Dapper Gamer! Im brand new here and to the youtube scene, so Id love a little feedback from the community. My channel is a pretty standard Lets Play format, bu Im hoping that good quality and a mature mindset will make my videos a step above the run of the mill channel out there. So if any of you can take the time to visit my channel, watch a few videos, and send any criticisms back my way I would greatly appreciate it. Listen to my audio, see if the frame rates are up to par, maybe let me know if theres any improvements I could make on my commentary.
A good place to start would be my Kerbal Space Program series. Its the newest so its pretty short and easy to find the first episode right on my home page. Thanks you so much and please be honest, only way to improve is to listen to everyones opinions.[
Hope this helps mate and just letting you know nothing I write is to be rude or mock you but to benefit you
Channel art is definitely the area where you need the most work currently there is nothing there that grabs attention, that makes people want to click on videos. For one you need a new banner it says nothing about your channel and is boring to look at so it gets no points there. The logo is fine but the thumbnails need work as well currently they are all the same image which sometimes works out but at the stage where you are trying to get noticed you need to be creative and artistic with thumbnails so people will gravitate towards them.
Audio is fine no real complaints on that end you sound fine so your good in this area.
Video Quality is also fine you have HD content so that puts you above many channels that don't but remember HD is standard for any channel attempting to grow. As for length your fine since you do lets plays longer videos work to your advantage.
Commentary again another area where you are fine. Since all you need to do is explain whats happening which is what you do already so good for you. You sound engaged in your commentary which is always good, you seem like your having fun which again is a plus. You talk just enough to be engaging and still keep focus so another plus.
Overall you have a really nice channel you just simply need to work on your channel art you can ask around on the forums for help but I recommend learning a bit just so you don't always have to go asking

nice work mate