Aside from obvious things...

[JackTheRipoff]

I would love to know what others think of my YouTube channel for how it is currently. I know that there are some current things that I plan to change very soon, i.e. the upload quality, as well as fix the lack of an intro/outro, but what do you think about the way I am as I play my games? I want to know if there is anything I should change or add to my personality that would make it a more entertaining and friendly personality for possible viewers in the future. Also if possible, I would like a review on the thumbnail, as I took a new approach to it and want to know if it looks better than my previous ones.

Here is the link to the video I would like to be reviewed:

 

[Kelkschiz]

I was pleasantly surprised. Generally I dislike Let's play videos but yours was somewhat entertaining. It's not something I would watch, but I only rarely watch Let's plays and then only of game I am interested in playing. That being said your Let's play videos definitely belong to the more interesting I saw recently. You have a very pleasant voice to listen to and you seem to have a nice friendly light hearted character. Also what you said was to the point and interesting to listen to. You also have a nice storytelling voice and you left no long silent stretches. I especially liked the parts where you were genuinely excited about a plot twist or revelation.

The only obvious thing to improve I can think of is the facecam, both the background and the lighting could be a lot better.

 

[JackTheRipoff]

I was pleasantly surprised. Generally I dislike Let's play videos but yours was somewhat entertaining. It's not something I would watch, but I only rarely watch Let's plays and then only of game I am interested in playing. That being said your Let's play videos definitely belong to the more interesting I saw recently. You have a very pleasant voice to listen to and you seem to have a nice friendly light hearted character. Also what you said was to the point and interesting to listen to. You also have a nice storytelling voice and you left no long silent stretches. I especially liked the parts where you were genuinely excited about a plot twist or revelation.

The only obvious thing to improve I can think of is the facecam, both the background and the lighting could be a lot better.

Thank you so much! I always try to portray my everyday self into my videos and seeing that I am doing well at that really means a lot! I have actually just recently bought myself a new camcorder as well as some new lighting equipment, so hopefully it'll look better in future videos to come. Again this review was awesome and so are you!!