Spudster100
YTtalk Mad
Review us?
anyone needs their channel reviewed? [HAS DELAY]
- Thread starter RamonRedcat
- Start date
Eternal Pig
The Baconator
Thanks for the review..some of the things you stated are intentional..I'll see what we can improve, thanks again
konisbored
YTtalk's Anti-Boredom Youtuber
Ah, boy, thanks, you put your heart into your reviewing, much like I used to do to others on a certain other forum before.Well, you're doing a good job c:
also, if theres another multi-co-op video you're doing i'd love to join in on it c:[DOUBLEPOST=1391206272,1391151035][/DOUBLEPOST]
Eurhm your channel seems to be shut down or something..?
The name is pretty cool, but the pronunciation is a bit odd cx
Alright lill about the logo, its cool and after seeing the channel trailer it's understandable, still is a bit odd cx Also the banner is alright, but seems a little basic
now on to the channel trailer
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Both tubers on the channel actually are there in the trailer
lotsa clips from your videos, diverse show of your videos
pehpeh!
'we are gunna finish this movie' actually made me really curious what that was about
Soothing voice for the intro
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the 'nahbuhyeeeh' sounds a bit overly bored. just a bit cx
the intro joke is a little slow, making it seem quite staged (even if it is, making it seem not to is pretty good)
some of the audio is less good volumewise, lill difficult to hear sometime
Some of the clips could've been a bit shorter, while others are incredibly short already.
in the intro 'Eternal pig' 's audio is quite some better than Tridents, ofcourse not very much of an issue as both are understandable.
It seems the clips contain some more of tridents footage, maybe that could be a bit more balanced.
SO euhm, i'd say you guys are doing quite a good job, but some things can still be improved if you want to seem a bit more professional.
Alright, i kinda asked for a video selected by you and a channel trailer, but you have neither. so i'll jut pick a random video and review that
COD:Ghosts - Epic Clutch
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you seem to be pretty damn good in the game.
high quality video
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You don't seem to commentate, maybe you talk a bit once in a while but it's not often and i'm not even sure it's you cx
you could add an intro
and an outro
the game audio isn't there, which gives less of a feeling for gaming
I personally don't know much about cod, therefore i honestly have no clue what you're doing, you could've introduced the video with an explanation or something of what you were about to do.
in short: I'm not sure what you wanted to do, honestly i dont know if you're trying to commentate or just show that you can play cod. Cuz you can play cod, but if you want to make videos about them you need to put a lot more into it. Practise makes perfect tho![DOUBLEPOST=1391207210][/DOUBLEPOST]
To quote myself here i said i would
"~ Give feedback on your channel trailer and the overall look of your channel.
~ Give feedback on the video of your choice you have submitted."
so euhm.
I'll quickly go over the other stuff you mentioned but that's really not my focus (or what i know much about cx)
thumbs: show vid's content but arent very personal
banner: bit basic (so is your icon)
playlists: well organized
chan. layout: no channel trailer,
G+: IDK what to say about this, good i guess i really dont know how to judge that cx
Fb: same as G+ i guess, but it seems very up to date so props for that
alright now the actual thing i get paid for (not really tho)
Kirby Super Star Episode 11: Taking Down Battleship Halberd!
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good n simple intro
VERY good audio and alright video quality
when you talk it's aimed at the audience, which can be quite good when conversing with your viewers
well balanced voice and game audio
your voicing of the characters is very entertaining
I like your voice c:
pretty cool that you tell what's going to happen in the next episodes
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you really don't talk all that much
you seem very distracted every time you start talking
you seem to know everything already
you are talking as if you're doing a walk through (=here you do this here you do that)
but it seems like you're attempting to do more of a let's play
any subbase with -army behind it is a bit overused. just saying cx
basically: You need to talk more. a lot more. But if you get used to that i think you can make some pretty entertaining videos c: as i said before, practise makes perfect, so practise as much as you need
Thank you, though, it's been a while since I had feedback, I'll take it to heart.
RamonRedcat
I've Got It
You're already on the list, no need to ask again, i review like 5 people a day or so but i have things to do outside of yttalk
No problemo! c: and good luck
very welcome and yess i put quite some effort into this cxAh, boy, thanks, you put your heart into your reviewing, much like I used to do to others on a certain other forum before.
Thank you, though, it's been a while since I had feedback, I'll take it to heart.
Spudster100
YTtalk Mad
Ok no problem 
I keep checking back on this thread
I keep checking back on this thread
MarkRodriguez2012
Youtube Reviewer
Yeah go for it. Review whatever video you want, though I preffer any of the Video Game Masters episodes. They're the ones that mix game footage, face cam and skits all in one video, LOL
RamonRedcat
I've Got It
Alriight! looking cool cx
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GoDH video: awesome editing skills
Nice gun,
awesome idea
good outro
nice after-titles with the font cx
also- good use of music and the dog
channelintro: Aweoms editing skills seriously c: very nice
many different pieces of footage used- nice c:
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GoDH video:
It's a bit slow maybe, i know the duck hunt game is slow cuz its kinda old, but you could've still tried to add a bit more speed into it.
channel intro: some of the sketches have a bit of a childish feeling to it, which is appealing to quite some audience, but personally i'm not always a fan. SO thats not much of a big deal just a personal thing
Really the speed is the biggest issue cx the editing is awesome. Also great ideas so nice c:!
seriously tho those editing skillss cx
