Best thing you can do is be SUPER humble about your videos and really be a critique of your own videos. If you can't figure out what is wrong, then ask someone like me,
gisikw,
Wreckless Eating for advice on how to improve (there are more people that have good advice I just don't know their names by heart lol) Those 2 have helped me like crazy. got me from 20 subs to almost 100 within a month. But be warned, you will need to understand we are not making fun of your video, rather actually wanting to help.
If you want me to help you out, PM me your favorite video and your worst video (in your opinion) and I will let you know what you did right and tell you what you need to improve

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