Any FeedBack would be appreciated

[JPlootz]

Heres a video could someone give me some feedback? any type of criticism is appreciated.
My Channel is comedy based.
thank you <3

 

[Lizzeelive]

This video is okay, but it isn't really funny. It is possible that your sense of humor just isn't for me, though! Anyway, the video was put together really well and it looked really nice, if that helps you any.

 

[JPlootz]

This video is okay, but it isn't really funny. It is possible that your sense of humor just isn't for me, though! Anyway, the video was put together really well and it looked really nice, if that helps you any.

ty been working on my editing style to make it more appealing for people

 

[Lizzeelive]

I try to edit, and then I fail horribly! Haha! I respect people who can edit because I cannot.

 

[KQ4rt]

Hi Lizz!

I will judge you based on what you give me here. It's very hard to make it funny if you put clips of crime/ drugs/ rape, maybe try something else other than that? Good commentary btw!

 

[JPlootz]

Hi Lizz!

I will judge you based on what you give me here. It's very hard to make it funny if you put clips of crime/ drugs/ rape, maybe try something else other than that? Good commentary btw!

<3 ty for the feedback Love this site so much because of this section I really do appreciate the help <3
and im gonna start working on easier things to make fun of <3