Cool.
You are a talker. That's great, you do it well. You might want to tweek the audio a little you are a little hard to hear when you do that sort of speaking under your breath to your self sort of thing. I like it.
Yeah, your a girl. And yeah, that is besides the point.
You do say that you are a bit random with your videos - which to be fair I think that a regular upload schedule is completely overrated and being honest is endearing. You do then go on to say that you are really consistent with your videos which is a little at odds with your first statement, but no big deal or anything.
There is a bit where you talk about not doing anything that you don't like, and that does make it seam like you might disappear of the face of youtube at any moment, so why invest in you? You know.
You do explain why you quit before and what you are doing differently so that sort of cancels that out a little bit.
All in all, after your rap up at the end you come across as a very friendly confident person. Sub don't sub, like dislike, I don't care. Have a good day. It's a good attitude for a person to have.
Graphics are pretty good, the Thanks for Watching bit was a little lame. Pumas revenge was a little hard to read, you might want to consider playing with the spacing or capitalisation, camelCase or something. And the PR profile pic looks clunky. I some of it is sort of temporary or something.
I'd definitely sub if i watched these sorts of videos, contrary to your own opinion, I do think you are good at commentary.
