Any Feedback on my latest video? (Comedy/Gaming)

[TerryByte]

I'm just looking on how to improve it more and so forth! Any feedback is greatly appreciated!

 

[thefedoranerd]

Right off the bat i would say your audio needs work, does your camera have a jack for an external mic? Try getting a clip on mic that you can hide in the scene or on your clothing it makes a wold of difference. I think your jokes were good but you might need to speed up the delivery a little. I think over all it's good but you just need to develop a better sense of comedic timing and get a better mic.

 

[Kirbe Games]

Try working on your thumbnails and making them look more professional.