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[Djopat Rey]

Hey my name's Dwight Rey,
I'm a vlogger and I make short films.
Check out my channel and comment about it. Any feedback is helpful

 

[YouTuber1978]

Talented from a technical point of view. No story line though. I watched your channel trailer and "the chase". As I was watching the chase I was like "that's a cool shot", "I like how he did that" etc. but I wasn't emotionally invested in the chase at all. Like zero. Make the same video but give me a reason to care about why I'm watching. Why's he running? Why is the guy chasing him? Who are the people in the car? Why did they help him escape? For that type of content it doesn't matter how "cool" it looks. If I'm not emotionally invested in the story I don't care what happens. Don't take this the wrong way. From a technical view point the video was super cool. I just need some basic plot to care. It's like watching a cool scene from a movie without having the rest of the movie. I only care than Neo stop bullets because I know whose shooting him and what the matrix is. Just seeing a scene in isolation isn't enough.

 

[Djopat Rey]

Talented from a technical point of view. No story line though. I watched your channel trailer and "the chase". As I was watching the chase I was like "that's a cool shot", "I like how he did that" etc. but I wasn't emotionally invested in the chase at all. Like zero. Make the same video but give me a reason to care about why I'm watching. Why's he running? Why is the guy chasing him? Who are the people in the car? Why did they help him escape? For that type of content it doesn't matter how "cool" it looks. If I'm not emotionally invested in the story I don't care what happens. Don't take this the wrong way. From a technical view point the video was super cool. I just need some basic plot to care. It's like watching a cool scene from a movie without having the rest of the movie. I only care than Neo stop bullets because I know whose shooting him and what the matrix is. Just seeing a scene in isolation isn't enough.

Thank you for the feed back I'll be fixing that

 

[V3XL0R]

I definitely love your style. I especially enjoy the vlogs and the type of camera that you use. I don't know why, but cameras like yours seem to capture moments from a different perspective much better.

 

[Djopat Rey]

I definitely love your style. I especially enjoy the vlogs and the type of camera that you use. I don't know why, but cameras like yours seem to capture moments from a different perspective much better.

Thanks for the feedback. I use a canon powershot SX50 HS, a GoPro Hero4, and Canon Rebel T5i(If you want to know what camera's I'm using)

 

[Bri Johnson]

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Hey my name's Dwight Rey,
I'm a vlogger and I make short films.
Check out my channel and comment about it. Any feedback is helpful

I agree with past comments, The Chase was very well shot but i was waiting for the "why" factor. Is the chaser really the bad guy? Or is the one being chased the person we need to watch for? Besides that though it was very well done, just needs a little bit of story line if you wouldn't mind checking out my vlog i just posted, I'm also looking for some constructive criticism

 

[Djopat Rey]

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I agree with past comments, The Chase was very well shot but i was waiting for the "why" factor. Is the chaser really the bad guy? Or is the one being chased the person we need to watch for? Besides that though it was very well done, just needs a little bit of story line if you wouldn't mind checking out my vlog i just posted, I'm also looking for some constructive criticism

Hey Your Style is a traditional vlog.
Just some points
-Never tell the audience in text
-If you make a mistake always check your screen if it's out of focus (I fall in these problems too)
- The cuts are uneven
-But the content is good
-I don't know what camera you're using but I think you need to invest some money for the future vlogs

Disclaimer I am not a professional vlogger, but you can check out my stuff and give me feed back would be nice

Thank you for the advice and yes I'm going to invest in a better camera in December, right now all I have is my phone haha how would you suggest i fix my editing? I'm using Windows Live Movie Maker and all i know to do is split the scene and delete out what i don't want. Is there something else you think I could do that would be better?

Hey
Using Windows movie maker is one of the lowest editing software I ever used, I only used it for 2 videos that i made. You can always get davinci resolve for free from their website (it's a bit advanced) or find a free version of powerdirector to edit your videos.
Also cutting videos need transitions, cuts are only good if you know how to play it well. It doesn't work if it's not
continuous.
My Examples of continuous shots:
Short:

Vlog: