Any feedback for this novice YouTuber??

[CrumpetKing]

Hi

So a while back I posted in this forum looking for some feedback and got some decent responses Since then I have tried my best to implement them ideas and make my channel interesting. So a few months later I'm back asking the same question.

Any more feedback from you guys?

I know my main focus is thumbnails which I have tried to improve over time.

If you guys would like any feedback on your channels I would gladly do that

Thanks

Crumpet King

 

[Ninja]

I'm just going to format this review into a list of positives and negatives.

Pros:
-Intro is well done and gives a good amount of information about your channel.
-Your commentary is humorous and is also really informative about the game you're playing.
- Good audio and video quality
- Good channel layout.
- Thumbnails for the 'Adventures of Tree' are great.

Cons:
-Your icon and banner aren't matching. The banner and icon themselves are good for starting off (there's room for improvement, I still frequently update my banner), but would have a better affect if they had the same theme or color scheme.
-Your thumbnails need a bit of aswell (with the exception of your 'Adventures of Tree' series), the font on most of them is too dark and small. Try going for a big, bold, white font with black outline. Also try getting an image that matches the game itself, your 'Fifa 15 BS' videos especially. You could still use all the rage/troll faces, but mayble photoshopped into a screenshot of the game (ex. a players face).
-Lack of editing; some points in your videos are uninteresting, either because of repetetive gameplay or dead air (no commentary). Try doing some minor editing to cut those parts out.

All the negatives can be easily corrected with a little bit of time and effort! Keep working at it Crumpet!