Any advice will help.

[Jackslapp]

YO so i made this video and i'd like to have an idea of what im doin wrong so um just tell me what to work on i guess and what u'd rate it,

My channels in my profile, please go check out the videos
LOOK------->Btw just clicking the name wont work, you have to type it

 

[Kira.Yamaguchi]

Please change your settings on your profile to Channel: /UCsTRI8UmiX3OMX1GL1mepUg

 

[Crown]

YO so i made this video and i'd like to have an idea of what im doin wrong so um just tell me what to work on i guess and what u'd rate it,

My channels in my profile, please go check out the videos
LOOK------->Btw just clicking the name wont work, you have to type it

@Jackslapp

I've moved your thread to the reviews forum. Please note that the review forum is the only forum where members can ask for feedback on their videos and channel (including artwork). We like to keep this sort of thread out of the main forums.

Good luck.


( To fix your link, please follow the instructions in this post: http://yttalk.com/threads/how-to-add-your-youtube-channel-to-every-message-post.32/ )