FatalAti
I've Got It
I started Youtube 5 months ago and loved it but after awhile my editing computer broke down and couldnt edit my videos so i stopped it till i get a good pc and camera and stuff. So now i m back an i try to have some feedback from my friends but they just tend to like it. And i dont like that i mean it is not something that you can be professional of in a day or two. So i was happy when i saw this section. So i just want to say a few things about myself before talking about the stuff that i want to be reviewed. I´m half Turkish and half Hungarian and I`m doing my ERASMUS exchange in Germany right now. So I`m not native speaker and i have decent enough English to do my commentating.
My main thing that i want to be reviewed of is my speaking and entertaining skill Either on the DEADBOLT or the SUPERHOT game. But if you have time enough i have some more stuff too;
I know i haven't done it for a long time but i need some feedback so i could change some stuff before it starts to harden on me ( with this i mean the speaking style and stuff ).
I hope you at least enjoy some part of the video and here is the last video that i took.It is a new indie game called DEADBOLT it was quite fun to play it and i hope i release the second part today.
I hope you enjoy roasting me So Go #TeamBrutalHonesty
PS: You might need to go to my channel doe if you want to answer all questions.
My main thing that i want to be reviewed of is my speaking and entertaining skill Either on the DEADBOLT or the SUPERHOT game. But if you have time enough i have some more stuff too;
- Outro lines and Intro lines (hello beautiful people this is Fatalati.)
- The Thumbnails I think they are good enough but should i make new thumbnails for every episode of video
- Outro Song and Outro Picture (where we put those little boxes so we can preview our content. You know... You know those little picture that we spend more time just so the videos in the box are at the right place)
- Logo and ChannelArt so the ones before was outdated and not well designed so i gve it like 4 hours and made new ones (With the 4 hours i mean 4 + 5 cuz i had to watch that 5 hours video of how to make a cool channel art and logo
) - Lightning in the videos I happened to have a big led desklight. It is really powerful so i putted a white clothe in front of it and open up the rooms light too.
- Background. IT IS way too white and i want to put some world map or something so i can lighten up the mood. Should i ?
- My voice and pronunciation. I think this is one of the important ones so i hope to find comments about it
- IS IT Entertaining?
- Voice quality: I try to edit the voice both mine and the gameplayes (compress, noise reduction, auto duck etc.)(I have a snowball ice in the last 3 videos.)
- Video quality? Both webcam and games video quality.
- Types of games that i play? Are they fun enough or just BOOORRRIIIING.
- Angels? Is my webcam well placed?
I know i haven't done it for a long time but i need some feedback so i could change some stuff before it starts to harden on me ( with this i mean the speaking style and stuff ).
I hope you at least enjoy some part of the video and here is the last video that i took.It is a new indie game called DEADBOLT it was quite fun to play it and i hope i release the second part today.
I hope you enjoy roasting me So Go #TeamBrutalHonesty
PS: You might need to go to my channel doe if you want to answer all questions.