Klink
I've Got It
@Dog
I was going to comment that your microphone was way too far from your face but that's improved in your latest videos.
The biggest issue to your channels' content comes down to your commentary. Right now your commentary is completely dead-pan. Being dead-pan isn't bad by itself as it can be used to great comedic effect, however in your case it's dead-pan delivery coupled with uninteresting things to say. Your reactions are completely one-dimensional and anyone watching your videos will know exactly what you're going to say and how you're going to say it.
No doubt you'll get better with every video you make but what you can do right now is practice. Write a few lines down, practice reading them over and over again until you can nail the delivery in a single take. It'll give you more confidence so you're less reliant on editing to make your words cohesive.
I wish I had more advice for you but that's really all your channel needs. Keep practicing, keep making videos and you'll get better over time.
@Jballergaming
As requested, my critique will be exclusively on 'THE NBA FINALS IN MADDEN 16' video.
Audio and audio mixing should be top priority going forward. You're peaking the audio quite often when screaming which leads to a lot of distortion. To top it off, the music you add in is way too loud compared to your vocals. For future videos, make sure that once you finish recording to look over the waveform in your audio editing program of choice and find out where the audio is going into the red zone (peaking) and do your best to reduce the decibels (db) until it's levelled. It'll still sound distorted but it won't be as loud to listen to which will help mask it up. When you add in music, make sure that the volume of the music is always lower than your vocals.
Good luck!
I was going to comment that your microphone was way too far from your face but that's improved in your latest videos.
The biggest issue to your channels' content comes down to your commentary. Right now your commentary is completely dead-pan. Being dead-pan isn't bad by itself as it can be used to great comedic effect, however in your case it's dead-pan delivery coupled with uninteresting things to say. Your reactions are completely one-dimensional and anyone watching your videos will know exactly what you're going to say and how you're going to say it.
No doubt you'll get better with every video you make but what you can do right now is practice. Write a few lines down, practice reading them over and over again until you can nail the delivery in a single take. It'll give you more confidence so you're less reliant on editing to make your words cohesive.
I wish I had more advice for you but that's really all your channel needs. Keep practicing, keep making videos and you'll get better over time.
@Jballergaming
As requested, my critique will be exclusively on 'THE NBA FINALS IN MADDEN 16' video.
Audio and audio mixing should be top priority going forward. You're peaking the audio quite often when screaming which leads to a lot of distortion. To top it off, the music you add in is way too loud compared to your vocals. For future videos, make sure that once you finish recording to look over the waveform in your audio editing program of choice and find out where the audio is going into the red zone (peaking) and do your best to reduce the decibels (db) until it's levelled. It'll still sound distorted but it won't be as loud to listen to which will help mask it up. When you add in music, make sure that the volume of the music is always lower than your vocals.
Good luck!
