Advice on Progression needed!

[Nuance]

Hey everyone! My name's Nuance, and I'm a gamer. Ive only played Minecraft so far on my new channel, but I just need an overall critique on my new videos l, art, and where I should go from here.

Thanks

 

[Jawad Soomro]

I think the avatar and banner are nice. If you could enlarge the red text of the banner a little bit more, should be awesome
COOL INTRO, I LIKE IT
Audio quality is awesome, talking power is cool
putting the music over voice is cool
I think you should promote your channel on promoting websites, it would help a lot
Outro is flat, I would suggest to make a professional one
Thumbnails are cool, I would suggest to make the TEXT of the thumbnails BOLD
All the best

 

[Nuance]

I think the avatar and banner are nice. If you could enlarge the red text of the banner a little bit more, should be awesome
COOL INTRO, I LIKE IT
Audio quality is awesome, talking power is cool
putting the music over voice is cool
I think you should promote your channel on promoting websites, it would help a lot
Outro is flat, I would suggest to make a professional one
Thumbnails are cool, I would suggest to make the TEXT of the thumbnails BOLD
All the best

I'll ask around for a professional outro and I'll work on making my thumbnail text bigger and bolder I'm thinking about making a new banner with a different map in background and bigger text.
Thanks about the intro and the audio I worked hard on the audio being good. I will try to promote on sites for it